Thursday 8 August 2019

Snails


I learnt how to write and comment and how to reply to one. 
It was fun to reply to the questions that your buddy asked you.

                                             

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Neve, my name is Kyra and I am a Year 8 student in Totara 2 at Grey Main School. I like your post because it's a different topic which was what caught my eye. I also agree with you that it is animal cruelty.

    In my class we are doing exposition writing on different things. Someone chose to do their writing on animals being in circuses. I find it saddening that these animals are forced into this, what do you think?

    Maybe next time you could put your work onto a google slide so it is easier to read as google docs are difficult to use sometimes. Amazing work and keep doing what you're doing!

    Kyra

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