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Kia Ora Neve, my name is Kyra and I am a Year 8 student in Totara 2 at Grey Main School. I like your post because it's a different topic which was what caught my eye. I also agree with you that it is animal cruelty.
In my class we are doing exposition writing on different things. Someone chose to do their writing on animals being in circuses. I find it saddening that these animals are forced into this, what do you think?
Maybe next time you could put your work onto a google slide so it is easier to read as google docs are difficult to use sometimes. Amazing work and keep doing what you're doing!
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Kia Ora Neve, my name is Kyra and I am a Year 8 student in Totara 2 at Grey Main School. I like your post because it's a different topic which was what caught my eye. I also agree with you that it is animal cruelty.
ReplyDeleteIn my class we are doing exposition writing on different things. Someone chose to do their writing on animals being in circuses. I find it saddening that these animals are forced into this, what do you think?
Maybe next time you could put your work onto a google slide so it is easier to read as google docs are difficult to use sometimes. Amazing work and keep doing what you're doing!
Kyra